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This week’s six is from my NaNoWriMo WIP entitled LUSTED IN LAS VEGAS. In this scene, Jason just arrives into town and asks Stephanie to meet him at the Luna Lounge located at their “Bellagio type” hotel in Las Vegas. This is their first meeting since their fateful night together in Miami.
Enjoy!
Panning the Luna, he sucked in a ragged breath as soon as he spotted her at the far end of the bar with her long legs crossed. Jason consumed her with his eyes, patiently savoring every detail of her exquisite form until his gaze reached her back. Urgency took over his body and shot straight down to his cock as his mind raced back to Miami, when she was his for one glorious night. Stephanie’s low cut midnight blue dress displayed the bare back he knew quite well. His hands curled into fists remembering the heat of her skin on his fingers as they traveled down every inch of her lovely back. Damn, there was no doubt, she had him.
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Great six! And the title is fab. Good luck with nano!
Thanks for the visit, Jasmine!
A sexy six! She definitely has a hold over him.
Yes, a hold since day one. Thanks, Jess.
Backs are so very sexy. Great six!
Hey Lisa! Totally agree!
Yep, dude, she definitely ‘has ya’. LOL. Nice 6, Sandra.
Oh, yes she does, J. Thanks for stopping by!
Great six, he’s definitely hooked!
A beautiful bare back can have that effect!
Whew! Nice, I love how he clenched his fists at the memory of touching her, very descriptive.
Thanks, Kelly!
Talk about a flashback! Nice.
Best type of flashback!
I like the heat under his fingertips…thought that was a really nice detail
Thanks Eleri, your comment is much appreciated!
Ooh very HOT! I do love the name Stephanie.
Awesome six, Sandra! Happy Sunday! *Hugs*
Thanks Stephanie!
Very sensual and nice. Picture goes perfectly too. This wasn’t about chickens at all!! You liar! **snort**
Ahh well, nope, not about chickens after all.
Great job! So sensual and flowing.
Thanks for stopping by, Carrie!
Lovely and vivid! I love reading how a man sees a woman!
Thanks Stacey! I love writing from his POV.
Oh, yeah. He’s hooked.
That he is!
Love the description of what’s going on inside his head and in his reactions. Great job, girl!
Its so much fun figuring out what’s going on in his head! Thanks, Zee.
Very hot-t-t.. “[H]eat of her skin under his fingernails.” Love that description! Sizzling six, Sandra! Good luck with NaNo.
Thanks, Ryan. I think you had the right idea about NaNo. I’m making progress but very slow progress.
So very sensual!
Thanks Dee!
A fantastic description and scene. Well done!
Thanks for stopping by and for your comment, Lorien.
He’s got it bad, doesn’t he?
Hey Lex! Yup, he certainly does.
Love to see that kind of aching attraction, in thsi case caused by his memories, not just the excited anticipation of being with someone new. Now torture him!
Thanks, Meg! You always give me the most delicious ideas…:-)
I love a man who knows when he’s “caught”! Great six… a ton of emotion from him in this snippet. Well done!
Thanks for your comment, Amy!
Nice six, backs are always sexy…along with hips, waists and thighs.
Hi July! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday and thanks for the comment!
He is so hooked
Great six!
Yes he is! Thanks Alix!
He’s still got it bad. Nice six!
Thanks for your comment, Sandra!
Great description–very hot!
That’s what I was going for so glad it worked! Thanks Jennifer!
Well, indeed! Clearly, he doesn’t mind her having him. And with that description, I don’t think I would, either.
Brien! I love your comments! Thanks so much for your visit.
great description and l love the picture!
Looked long and hard for that pic! LOL! Glad you like it, Gemma. Thanks!
Tingly awareness + memory = hot stuff indeed. I bet this meeting is going to see some sparks flying.
Yes – its just the beginning! Thanks Vivien.
Excellent description of the past memories that the present elicits.
Thanks for your visit and comment, Karysa!
Oh yeah. He’s toast. Hook, line and sinker!
Absolutely!!
Wow! I wish I could have that affect on a man.
I know, right?? LOL! Thanks Ruth!
Delicious six!
Thanks! Good luck with your release!
YOWZA!! She has got him alright! HAWT six. Here’s hoping he has her again
Good luck with Nano, though if these sentences are anything to go by, you’re rocking it! WOOT