Happy Mother’s Day to all of the sixer moms out there. It’s our day, ladies!
This week’s six is from my sensual romance novella, SARA’S SMILE, releasing on May 18th! I’m having a summer kick-off Sara’s Smile release party and you are all invited. Please stop back to my blog on Friday to sip on a mojito, play some summer triva and maybe even win prizes.
In this scene, Will has just asked Sara to throw reason to the wind and stop time for a while. Here’s a little Sara’s Smile triva…I posted snippets from this scene when it was still a working WIP, does anyone remember what happened in the original version?
She pulled away from his kiss, took him by the hand and led him into the hotel.
She was thankful for the empty elevator because, as soon as the door closed, she was free to crush her mouth to his.
“Sara,” he murmured, and backed her up, pinning her to the elevator wall. His tongue teased her lips apart and glided along her teeth.
She relinquished her tongue to his, her heart rate elevating along with the car as they climbed the floors, one by one, until the doors opened on the twenty-second floor.
Will fumbled for his access card, while Sara planted a trail of kisses down his neck and began unbuttoning his shirt.
Thanks for stopping by to read my snippet and especially for any comments you are inclined to leave. If you would like to add Sara’s Smile to your Goodreads shelf, please click here.
I’m taking a few weeks off from Six Sentence Sunday to finish a WIP and prepare for my book tour. See you again in June!
~S
Less than FIVE days, girly-girl! Love the desperate kiss scenes. Those are my fave.
4 days, 3 hrs & 50 min according to my clock over there –>
(that thing is making me nervous!)
That is one sexy six! I can feel the anticipation.
TY, Jess!
She’s ready and eager!
She just wasn’t ready to say good-bye. Thanks for stopping in, Cara!
Very hot and sensual, love the anticipation!
Thanks, Gemma!
Beautifully written. Oh, the anticipation!
Keep these snippets coming.
Sweet! Thanks, Layna!
ooohhh…very sensual scene build..loved it!
Hey Christine, glad the scene worked!
Sexy sexy!
TY TY!
Love how her heart rate elevates along with the car. Very sexy! And love the cover.
That was a slice of heaven. Oh yeah I’m excited, but I’m going to miss you while you are gone.
Your book tour is going to rock, prepare yourself.
Oh, and Happy Mother’s Day!!
Hey SJ! I can’t wait to visit you on my tour! So excited…
Going up? ;D
LOL!
He’s going to have trouble with that key card, I predict! Very HOT six, really felt their passion, wasn’t ready for it to end…
Thanks Veronica! They do eventually end up inside the room.
Hot damn! That’s so hot, Sandra. Can’t wait for the 18th! Great six (and super curious to know what the WIP version had them doing!)
KE! You are awesome! Thanks so much.
Great six! I’m not sure they’ll make it to the bed…
Thanks, Lorraine! Lol…they do…eventually!
Such a hot six! Can’t wait to read more.
Thanks, Jenny! I appreciate your visit.
In your original version, she hesitated and made some excuse? I like that, here, she’s willing to take a risk to recapture what she’s longed for all this time.
Yes, she ended up taking a cab home because the first draft was a little complicated. I cut the noise and focused on Sara and Will’s relationship growth. It works much better now and I’m thrilled with the finished product. Thanks for your comment!
I remember enjoying snippets from your sss posts while this was a wip. Big congratulations on your release this week!
Hey Gem! This has been a long time coming. Thanks for your well wishes!
Wow, that was hot! Great job!
I love a girl who takes what she wants. Fun six, Sandra. Unfortunately, I don’t remember what happened in an earlier version, But I like this one.